‘There was such a sense of helplessness she was overwhelmed. The crowd surged forward with sticks and any weapon they could lay their hands on.’ This is where Sonya got stuck, she had a writer’s block. Everyone she told this to, couldn’t believe it because they thought it was a strong beginning and there were so many routes to take this story.
However Sonya is the only one to decide that but having opened the door to other people’s thoughts and ideas, well it doesn’t hurt to get peer, fan and critical input. What do you think?